SilverWood Books certainly pulled out the stops for me.
SilverWood Books certainly pulled out the stops for me.
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SilverWood Books certainly pulled out the stops for me. Now I’ve started telling people about my first alternate history thriller coming out in March, one person said, ‘Oh, you’re lucky, you can make up anything!‘ Er, no. It’s about plausibility. Merriam Webster gives one definition: ‘appearing worthy of belief <the argument was both powerful and plausible>‘. Synonyms include credible, creditable, likely, believable, presumptive, probable. So how far can a storyteller stray? To enjoy a story, we need to feel that the author’s world is – within its own logic – plausible. We know that too many coincidences are not a good thing in fiction, however frequently they actually occur in real life. Ideally, a writer builds up a sequence of events that not only follows a plausible path but which we the readers believe could not possibly develop in any other way. And if there are two equally plausible choices at critical points, thus preventing us from guessing what’s going to happen next or at the end, the story will not disappoint by being predictable. And for a story, however fantastical, to be plausible it must be grounded in the reader’s world. If Boudicca (Boadicea in old money) met Buffy the vampire slayer, we know they were both women fighters who defied enemies threatening the existence of their worlds, had both lost a deeply significant other and passionately loved their families. Okay, one was a tad dim… But defiance, loss and love are things we all know about. Within a story, we have to detect aspects of our own world otherwise we won’t understand, let alone engage with the story. In short, plausibility in fiction is the detection of familiarity. How can writers give their stories plausibility even if the plots or characters are very weird? 1. Tell whoppers confidently. How often is a film carried by a formerly dismissed maverick scientist, often a reformed drunk or grief bound widower, coming back and saving the day? Why? Because once we have swallowed the confident lie, we’ll follow the rest of the story as long as the writer keeps our trust. One way to do this is to infuse, but not flood, the story with corroborative detail so that it verifies and reinforces the original whopper. Even though my book is set in the 21st century, the Roman characters say things like ‘I wouldn’t be in your sandals (not shoes) when he finds out.’ And there are honey-coated biscuits (honey was big with the ancient Romans) not chocolate digestives in the squad room. 2. Give your characters normal behaviour. 3. Tie up loose ends. That doesn’t mean every character needs to have their life story told but writers should try not to leave any obvious dangling bits, or non sequiturs, if you prefer. 4. No alien space bats And if you do need to use a character with strange gifts or knowledge, a few lines of background carefully woven in will smooth their introduction. If a writer can make those absurdities or missing links appear rational, we will be believe every word in the story and go on to buy the next book in the series. When I first started this blog on World Book Day not quite three years ago (4 March 2010) I had just signed my indentures as a mad newbie writer, so the title Write a Novel? I must be mad! was an appropriate one. While I will never give up learning – no human being, let alone no writer ever should – I feel that it’s time for refreshment. And we’re not talking about a cup of tea. My first book, INCEPTIO, comes out on 1 March this year. I have survived the initial mad phase and am passing into the institutionalised one where I hope to produce novels on a reasonably regular basis. Perhaps I will never be released from this obsession of writing… I write thrillers with a strong heroine. She gets into scrapes: treason, death threats, kidnappings, betrayals, let alone organised crime, and comes near to losing her life and her love several times in the course of the novels. She has a temper, but tends to let it out only when she thinks she’s being treated unfairly. But she matures and learns valuable, if not always palatable, lessons about herself. But her biggest challenge is the world she lives in, mainly because she wasn’t born there. Roma Nova, lying somewhere between the Northern Confederation of Italy and New Austria was founded sixteen centuries ago by a group of Romans fleeing persecution by the Christian Emperor Theodosius in AD 395. And they’ve managed to tough it out until the 21st century. Welcome to the world of Roma Nova.
This equalising idea is a bit boring, so writers tend to opt for the doom scenario, ladling all sorts of dreadful consequences over the butterfly’s head. Closely related is the ‘For the want of a nail’ theory when one tiny missing thing leads to world-changing events. And they’re always bad ones. In alternate history, writers can play with these types of ideas to introduce a point of divergence to bring about full-blown complex political, economic and social change. In Ray Bradbury’s A Sound of Thunder, a butterfly is crushed in the time of the dinosaurs by a time-traveller which has the consequence in the ‘present’ of electing a fascist leader instead of a moderate one. Alternatively, in a film like Sliding Doors, dealing with a purely personal story, missing a train splits the heroine’s life into two possible timelines, one transforming and the other fatal. If you’re fascinated by the butterfly of doom as a story device visit TV Tropes.
Everybody has potential points of divergence in their lives when they make choices. But the butterfly, or missing nail, can make those choices for you. Alison Morton is the author of Roma Nova thrillers, INCEPTIO, and PERFIDITAS. Third in series, SUCCESSIO, is now out. Oh, the sneering! Oh, the superiority! Even Lynne Truss (Eats, Shoots and Leaves) is on BBC Radio4 broadcasting a series of witty ripostes to round-robins (RRs). Now some RRs are painful: long-winded, which goes hand-in-hand with boring; poorly composed and/or typed; with scattered blurry photos; and produced with tight margins in tiny, coloured or weird fonts. But some gems are witty, near professional offerings, mostly photos with hilarious captions leaving you wanting more. The best ones make you grab the ‘phone or start bashing out an email to the sender immediately after reading. In time-strapped, intense lives, the RR can reach many more people without the sender getting RSI, paying a fortune for individually printed photos or dying from exhaustion and insanity repeating the same stuff up to, and possibly beyond, a hundred times. How are RRs different from all the blog posts we chuck out indiscriminately into the digiverse? But, like trying to avoid the slush-pile that many writers end up on, how do you write an RR that’s entertaining, informative and has that spark of something special? I’ve been sending them out for over twenty-five years, well before the time they became fashionable, so I’ve got some experience. Keep these key points in front of you:
Do you write or receive RRs? Go on, now, tell me your thoughts…
Updated 2025: Alison Morton is the author of Roma Nova thrillers – INCEPTIO, CARINA (novella), PERFIDITAS, SUCCESSIO, AURELIA, NEXUS (novella), INSURRECTIO and RETALIO, and ROMA NOVA EXTRA, a collection of short stories. Audiobooks are available for four of the series. Double Identity, a contemporary conspiracy, starts a new series of thrillers. JULIA PRIMA, Roma Nova story set in the late 4th century, starts the Foundation stories. The sequel, EXSILIUM, is now out. Find out more about Roma Nova, its origins, stories and heroines and taste world the latest contemporary thriller Double Identity… Download ‘Welcome to Alison Morton’s Thriller Worlds’, a FREE eBook, as a thank you gift when you sign up to Alison’s monthly email update. As a result, you’ll be among the first to know about news and book progress before everybody else, and take part in giveaways. |
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