Via Domitia - the background

Several people have commented on the new look of this blog (which is lovely of them) and asked me about the background.

Of course, it’s a Roman road and in particular it’s the Via Domitia at Ambrussum, near Nimes in southern France. The Via Domitia  provided a fast and sure link from Spain to Italy. constructed in 118BC by the proconsul Gnaeus Domitius Ahenobarbus.

Roman roads were built to link public administration, especially the postal service, but first and foremost to provide a  cross-continental system for the rapid movement of troops. But trade followed and many Roman roads were used into the medieval period which explains the well-worn chariot (or more likely the more mundane cart) tracks.

 

A non-typical Roman…

But you can see the scale of the road; it easily accommodated two-way traffic if need be.

A stack of detail about how they were built is at
Building Roman Roads – The Roman Surveyors

And here’s a typical cross-section.
Courtesy of britannica.com

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Alison Morton is the author of Roma Nova thrillers, INCEPTIO, and PERFIDITAS. Third in series, SUCCESSIO, is now out.

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The end of book2

No, I haven’t killed off my second book. My self-edits are over and the typescript has gone to a beta reader.  So what did the process involve?

First of all, I check my event grid. This is my table of contents, a brief summary of events in each chapter; who says what to whom, what is discovered, what is hidden, the next problem, the bad news, action taken.

Sometimes when writing a scene in a sub-plot or sub-sub-plot, I forget if one person knows what another is up to, how long it takes to get from A to B or if someone’s had enough time to heal from a gunshot wound. It helps to prevent snowstorms in summer and eleven month pregnancies.

Next, I sit around looking enigmatic. What I’m really doing is thinking, especially about each character’s time line. Does each person’s story hang together logically? Of course, it’s the main character’s story, but each of the secondary characters needs to have a logical progression. I write my protagonist in the first person, so I play a game of writing from each of the secondaries’ point of view in the first person. It’s good fun as well!

Then I whip out the red pen and hunt out padding and fluff  line-by-line. (I  typed fliff instead of fluff at first and changed it back, but fliff describes it so much better). This is where I try to remember all those mini-maxims I’ve learnt over the past 18 months.

But “rules” is not always rules.

SDT (Show dont’t tell), i.e. standing in the room with the character as the action as it happens.  Sometimes, to compress a load of boring stuff or time between events, telling is the most compact way, but not to describe the crisis point in the story.

LIM (Less is more), but not to the extent of making the writing cold and sterile. I test out deletions by cutting (Ctrl C) rather than deleting the word/phrase/sentence. Easy to put back if the narrative or dialogue really, really doesn’t work without the cut text.

RUE (Resist the urge to explain), also known as The reader WILL get it. This is so difficult, but readers are pretty intelligent and will get irritated if you harp on about the obvious or say the same thing twice in different words to make sure you’ve got the point across. Basic guideline – don’t do it.

Kill adverbs. Well, not every one, but check you are not overdoing them and scrutinise their function in each sentence. Delete rather, quite, very and so by default and make them earn their place back.

Star-chamber all adjectives (That expression’s mine – more on the real Star Chamber here).  Unless it’s necessary to the plot, does it matter what colour a car is? You need adjectives to describe your characters, but keep them to an absolute minimum. Readers like to imagine the details themselves.

Replace felt, was, had, thought, wonder and suddenly where you can, but don’t have hysterics if you need to use them in their proper place.

Use strong verbstrudge, stride, shuffle, totter, march, saunter instead of walk.

And lastly, get the throat sweets ready, clear your schedule and read the whole blessed thing aloud in one go.

I love this stage where I can bring dull bits to life,  extend tension to an unbearable point, cut the crap and polish each word to ultimate beauty.

How do you see edits?

Competition: Write about your filofax memories

Write 300-500 words  about your favourite filofax memory and you could win a brand new oganiser. Now enjoying a strong revival, filofax is regaining the worldwide popularity seen in the 1980s.

This October, filofax and Philofaxy would like to invite you to share your favourite filofaxmemory. Whether it’s a tale about your first filofax, the story of your first visit to the filofax store or even a moment when a filofax played an important part in your life, we want to hear from you!

Over the next two weeks, you will be able submit your cherished filofax memories by 26th October at 23:59 (UK time) to philofaxy at gmail dot com This can be beautifully handwritten, typed or even drawn onto the special filofax diary page template which you can download from the link below.

Philofaxy will then choose the top 10 memories to be uploaded onto the official filofax Facebook page for fans all over the world to read and ‘like’.

On the 4th November, the three memories which have the most ‘likes’ from the Philofaxy will receive brand new filofax organisers as a very special thank you for participating in the challenge.

Interested in sharing your filofaxmemories? Here’s how to take part:

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Good luck!

 

Constantly evolving…

You may notice that this my blog has changed a little. It’s going to change even more soon.

Like writing itself, blogs must evolve.

Insane or inspired? The fabulous Kate Johnson

I’m (literally) thrilled to welcome Kate Johnson and her alter ego, Cat Marsters, to my blog today. Buckle up!

How did you get started? And how old were you when your first book was published? 
Really it’s a total lack of skill or training in any other area! I knew I wanted to write from my teenage years, so I pretty much spent the years between then and now learning to write as I might have trained to do any job. So while this meant I started early it also means I couldn’t let myself fail, or it’s back to shifts at the airport. My first novella was published when I was 23, my first novel just before I was 24.

Do you know how many books you’ve had published, or have you lost count 😉 ?
Erm. The latter I’m afraid! The count stands at five novels as Kate Johnson and two as Cat Marsters, plus twenty or so novellas. Or maybe thirty. I’m not quite sure.

You write as both Cat Marsters (paranormal/fantasy) and Kate Johnson (spy fantasies/chick-lit mysteries) What draws you to those particular areas? And which do you prefer?
Well, they’re starting to cross over now, since my last Kate Johnson book was paranormal too. I tend to use a content distinction as opposed to a genre one; by which I mean the Kate Johnson ones are mainstream and the Cat Marsters are erotic romance. As to why I write in these areas…hmm, anybody’s guess! I suppose I write what I like to read, and those are my favoured genres. I always joke that I write paranormal because then I can make stuff up instead of researching it…

In I Spy? main character Sophie is a bit mad. No getting away from it, but lovable in a daft way. What made you develop her like this, or did she just take over the story as you wrote it?
A bit from column (a) and a bit from column (b). I first wrote her when I was about 21 or 22 although she’s been refined a bit since then. Yes, I said refined. So I suppose there’s a lot of youthful energy about her and that lack of direction that’s both freeing and frightening at the same time. She’s got that early twenties ebullience, completely unaware of how young she is, and how likely failure is. She’s still, to use an analogy from her favourite TV show, not done baking yet, trying to work out who she’s going to be. The things she already knows about herself are not particularly concrete: she’s not going to be a pretty blonde forever and she doesn’t want to end up drifting and aimless.

She’s also a product of my particular hatred of weak, wimpy heroines like the ones I was forced to read for GCSE English (there’s a reason Sophie despises Tess of the d’Urbervilles). Unlike Luke, her hero, she’s not had any special training to become a spy or even take care of herself, but that doesn’t matter because no one gets to push Sophie around, at least not for long. I wanted to say that even if you’re not a highly trained operative you don’t have to be a pushover; you can always stand up for yourself, you can always fight.

I thoroughly enjoyed The Untied Kingdom, especially the contrast of the dark, desperate situation and the gallows humour.  Are you now entering a more “serious” phase of your career?
Maybe. Maybe I’m growing up, although I do hope not. I think the content of my books is often quite dark, even when the tone is light. As one of my favourite writers (Joss Whedon) says, “Make it dark, make it grim, make it tough. Then for the love of god tell a joke.”  I’ve been told by editors that my books are a bit gloomy for romance novels, as if they ought to be just light and fluffy all the time. Oh, how I laughed! Then shot another character.

On heroes, your website Days of the Insane, has a more than respectable scattering.  I realise your undying wish is to have Richard Armitage play Major Harker in the film version of your book. But do I detect more than a little hint of Richard Sharpe in Major Harker’s character?
Indeed you do! I actually got a lot of information and ideas from not just the Sharpe series but The Sharpe Companion, which fills in a lot of the background to the books and gave me a wealth of information about a serving soldier’s daily life on the Peninsula, and the possibility (very low) of promotion from the ranks. Even how many lashes of the whip would be considered to kill a man.

Major Sharpe

There was a great description of Sharpe as “bone and muscle, not a hint of flab. In this, he was typical of virtually every infantry soldier in the Peninsula… Their hardness, toughness and fitness far surpassed the soldiers of any modern army, with the possible exception of special forces.” I wanted to write a character like that, a really heroic hero, someone who just wouldn’t fit into our modern world. Therefore, I had to invent a world for him!

The Companion also details Sharpe’s many injuries, pointing out that by the end of the war he was severely battered: “Stripped, an observer must have wondered how he was still alive.” That description stayed with me when I was writing Harker, to the extent that wondering how he’s still alive is Eve’s first question when she sees him with his shirt off.

And…oh gosh, have you noticed my crush on Mr Armitage?

To plot or not to plot? Are you a planner or do you just dive in?
I plot very little. That is to say, I don’t write things down. It’s a funny thing, but writing it down seems to spoil the process, and if I can fool my writing brain into thinking it’s making everything up as I go along, then everything works a lot better. I keep a plot loose in my head but quite often don’t have a clue where a story is going when I start writing it. I honestly didn’t know how The Untied Kingdom was going to end; on the other hand I’ve got my current Wip fairly clear in my head. Maybe that’s why it’s being so difficult about getting written!

What is the hardest part of the writing process for you?
It’s not writing so much as editing. Figuring out what I need to do to fix a book can be torturous, and so can getting edits back from an editor. Until then I can kid myself the book is perfect as it is…and then the editor does her job of finding fault with it and it’s like someone pointing out that your baby really is quite ugly!

Do you enjoy research, and how do you set about it?
I do, but I occasionally get frustrated when I can’t find the answer to a question. This is of course where it’s handy to write fantasy: I can make up the answer if I want! I get out library books, I check my own little library, I go online and–this is my new favourite way to find stuff out–I ask Twitter! Let me see if I can remember any particular research methods for The Untied Kingdom…apart from the Sharpe books and making charts of army chains of command on my computer, I seem to recall asking my brother questions about playing the guitar over a few pints in the pub.

How do you develop your characters?
Quite often they develop themselves. Harker, for instance, came from a few influences–Sharpe, as well as Terry Pratchett’s Sam Vimes and Firefly‘s Mal Reynolds–but once I started writing him he took on a life of his own. Eve, on the other hand, had no particular influences. I thought, “Hey, a washed up popstar, that’ll be fun,” and just went on from there.

While I was rewriting Run Rabbit Run, I added in a lot from the hero’s point of view and the more I wrote, the more I discovered about him. Sometimes it feels like the characters are already there, already existing, and I’m just getting to know them. I thought I knew Luke quite well, but then I wrote a few scenes, almost stream-of-consciousness, and suddenly there was a lot more depth to him.

Which authors who have influenced you?
Terry Pratchett and Jennifer Crusie, both for being clever and funny. And Joss Whedon, who created Buffy the Vampire Slayer and Firefly and showed me that you can be funny and dark at the same time .

How do you relax? What interests do you have other than writing?
Reading, obviously. Twitter. I probably watch far too much TV and go to the cinema reasonably often. I like walking but don’t do it as often as I should, because basically I’m lazy. I sing a bit sometimes, mostly to myself because it’s not necessarily something anyone else wants to listen to.

I know you are very active on Twitter (@K8JohnsonAuthor), have your blog at http://etaknosnhoj.blogspot.com/ and a Facebook fan page https://www.facebook.com/catmarsters How do you feel these have helped your career? And how would you rate each for their usefulness to a newbie writer?

I’d rate them highly. The thing is that as a published author you’re expected to have an online presence, so you might as well practice that just as you practice your writing craft. Who knows whether a potential publisher or agent might look you up online? And you can’t discount useful connections, with other authors if nothing else, who can not only teach and advise you but also possibly talk you up!

As for how they’ve helped my career, I’ll just say that the first of the Sophie books was sold after a friend I met online recommended me to her editor. (Wow!)

Can you tell us something of your work in progress?
Well…here goes. It’s a fantasy epic about a blind slave (that’s the concise version). My hero, a warlord and privateer, belongs to an elite caste of people with supernatural gifts, which are denoted by tattoo-like markings on the skin. He finds a starved, abused slave with not one or even two of these marks, which is highly unusual, but three, which is unheard of and takes her from being the lowest wretch in the land to the most exalted. He’s a big, brutal, self confident guy, and she’s terrified of her own shadow, so the trick is to bring him down a peg or two and build her up a bit. I do like to set myself a challenge.

And finally, what advice would you give a new writer?
Don’t give up. If you quit, you get won’t published. If you keep going, you might get published. And I know ‘might’ isn’t as good as ‘will’, but it’s a lot better than ‘won’t’.

Thank you, Kate, for an excellent interview. This is where I admit to a shared fascination with Major Sharpe and thus Major Harker. And yes, heroines  should be able to stand up for themselves, challenge and keep their personal integrity.

Kate’s latest, The UnTied Kingdom is thoroughly recommended. I loved it!